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forgiveness in the third chord,
like silence or the moment
artemis pulls the arrow free,
thanks the buck for his sacrifice.

lightning in my lungs.
saltwater in my lungs.
i, storm,
will rage & pass on.

burn all the bridges.
poetry ©  :iconlittle-bird-bones:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Writer
Congratulations on the DD, hon! This is a wonderful piece; one of the strongest I've seen from you! I can't wait to read more of your work. :heart:
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sea-rchlight Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much!! aah this was such a surprise & i can't even begin to express how honored i am to receive recognition for this piece, especially after feeling a bit unhappy with it oh gosh ;;

thank you a thousand times over, lovely soul!
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
:heart: :heart: :iconpirateglompplz: :heart: :heart:
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DarkNightlitMoons Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice job! :D
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sea-rchlight Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!!
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DarkNightlitMoons Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome! :)
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JackieStarSister Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I love how short and poignant these stanzas are, similar to haikus, effective because they are succinct. And yet you hit on such universal themes as forgiveness and sacrifice, while tying in a bit of mythology and nature. Wonderful work.
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LeftUnfinished Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely. :heart:
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
SALTWATER IN YOUR LUNGS?!

*swivels around in chair* ME?!

Haha. Anyways, your wording is simple but very impactful. Nice work!
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copper9lives Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So poignant and powerful... I know this moment. And I know the moment after, salt drying on my skin standing in the storm wrack, choosing a new heading.
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